Sexual Vice.
Sticky Fingers.
Blushing almost Bitter,
Complicated Cruelties.
Whisper in my ear
Ecstasy
Eroticism...only in my mind
Where do I hide?
I can't swallow that hard.
Casual corruption,
Lusting never felt this good.
Sticky fingers
Sexual vice
Baby, tonight we roll those dice.















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I was wondering...if you changed the last line:
Baby, tonight we roll that dice.
to be:
Baby, tonight we roll those dice.
would that change the meaning to you?
I just thought it sounded "better"
But still ..It's awesome prose.
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