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Sexual Vice.
Sticky Fingers.
Blushing almost Bitter,
Complicated Cruelties.
Whisper in my ear
Ecstasy
Eroticism...only in my mind
Where do I hide?
I can't swallow that hard.
Casual corruption,
Lusting never felt this good.
Sticky fingers
Sexual vice
Baby, tonight we roll those dice.
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*nickgmonster:iconnickgmonster: Apr 27, 2008, 7:33:41 PM
Wow.... imagery...:nod:
I was wondering...if you changed the last line:
Baby, tonight we roll that dice.
to be:
Baby, tonight we roll those dice.
would that change the meaning to you?
I just thought it sounded "better"

But still ..It's awesome prose.
:handshake:

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=bittersweetash:iconbittersweetash: Apr 27, 2008, 9:45:51 PM
to be honest that last line was just added quickly at the end so i'll think about changing it :D
Thank you for commenting

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.Ash.